再别康桥 . 徐志摩

david.zh

轻轻的我走了，
正如我轻轻的来；
我轻轻的招手， 　
作别西天的云彩。

那河畔的金柳 　
是夕阳中的新娘
波光里的艳影， 　
在我的心头荡漾。

软泥上的青荇，
　油油的在水底招摇；
在康河的柔波里，
　我甘心做一条水草


那榆荫下的一潭，
　不是清泉，是天上虹
揉碎在浮藻间，
　沉淀着彩虹似的梦。

寻梦？ 撑一支长篙，
　向青草更青处漫溯，
满载一船星辉，
　在星辉斑斓里放歌

但我不能放歌，
　悄悄是别离的笙箫；
夏虫也为我沉默，
　沉默是今晚的康桥！

悄悄的我走了，
　正如我悄悄的来；
我挥一挥衣袖，
　不带走一片云彩。
〖∑伊荷lt主持〗掏出番茄，大咬了几口。“味道好极了！”

小球

david ,thank u so much
according to the character of english world,i must delete it
hope i can get ur supprot

david.zh

" according to the character of english world,i must delete it "
  
What means? I couldn't follow you fairely well.Perhaos it is a chinese poem,and I realise it ,so I gave its English version,you know? :)

小球

yeah~~~
i see,,,,,,i think u should copy the passage in ur english version,so it has a  comparison,what about ur idea?
several days no seen u,hope everything is ok
and thank u for ur sms,
because i am busy when i saw ur message,so i never reply to u,sorry

david.zh

Thank you! I am quite fine!
As i mentioned in the SM I am a sophpmore,and now the final-exam is approacing,so I coulnd't too much time to visit the Internet.However when I come I do will bring sth new to my dear forum. :)

小球

thank u
and hope you got high marks in ur tests

david.zh

WIth the praise&the hipe of my Master,I do will make my efforts ! :)

小球

hehe~~
thank u
i must take my hat to u for u good job
u give us many advice .
and i am all my ears.i will take ur advice into action

david.zh

Master,do you have QQ or something other way that I could contact with you?  
I think you have got a job,so will you be willing your consoderale experience with me ,as that day is no longer far for me.
I hunger for that likes? My QQ is 164128262.
How about your cell phone?

david.zh

It seems you are good at using idioms. :)
So,if you could bring some idioms to our foru to share with us, i would on behalf of other memberes to appreciarte you. :)

小球

i have added u into my QQ,
sorry for later reply.
i will do my best.and thank u for ur mind ,thank u

david.zh

Sorry,I made too much mistakes when typing!
Noe I"d like correct some that I"ve found.Master,if you find some will you point them out to me,thanks!
  1, I couldn't spare too much time to visit Internet.
2,with the praises &hope of my master,I do will
3,considerable experience.