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楼主: 仙山笋

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发表于 2005-10-28 07:54 | 显示全部楼层
it's yesterday once more...

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-27 16:28 | 显示全部楼层
<>9</P><> Yesterday I went to datong, the farrest place from here in tiantai. It took us nearly 2 hours to get there by car.  Along the way there were mountains with thick forests  which were  green and nice. The air was so fresh that make us very comfortable. We arrived at the primary school,seeing lots of children aging from 6-13. And the school was small but there standed a new building which seemed to be built by a  rich and kind person ,because its name was "ci xin lou".</P><> I walked around the school. It was break time and the children were playing games. The small classrooms, desks, small chairs, blackboards , all of those made me a little shocked because they were so familiar to me. It drawed me back to my childhood suddenly.</P><> I studied in a small school when I was a little girl. We had lessons in the opendoor before grade 2, because there were not enough classrooms. There were only 7 teachers and about 150 students so some teachers had to teach 2 or more subjects. Our headmaster, a pretty woman,Mis Yu, teached us Chinese, singing, and draw. She was kind to all of us that everyone loved her.  We leaded such a happy life there.  During the break we played all kinds of games and in the class we studied together. After school we often played pingpong  or go out to the fileds. So joyed. Sometimes we girls argued with boys who often bullied us. And now it makes me burst into laughter. </P><>So happy life! And it never comes back again.  Every time when I look back to these days,I smile to myself.</P><>So happy life! </P>[em04]

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-1 10:39 | 显示全部楼层
<>How many children do you want to have? Someone asked me.</P><>"As many as possible" I joked.</P><>I love children very much.They are so lovely that make you full of joy as well as trouble too ,of course.Yesterday I talked to an American woman via net.She told me that her mother has 11 children,which was so amazing to me. They can even form a football team!</P><>But it is forbidden in China to bore more than 2 children. And American people think it is one's privilege to bore. In my opinion, population control is necessary in China. According to traditional mind,people like to bore more babies so that when they are old,they will be supported better.  But for China's development,the large population is a great burden because the resource is limited. So for  the long run,China carried out the campain of population control and it makes some different. And I hope that some decades later there will be chance that people can bore more children if  they like. </P>

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-7 08:29 | 显示全部楼层
<>Haven't  been here for days.</P><>Sometimes the life is full of surprise that make you happy or sad or annoyed. I came across the happiness and upset during one afternoon. My company conformed me to go to Hangzhou for 4-day education. I went on the high way with happy mood and the imagination of the beautiful  sight of the west lake.  Just then they called me that the date of education was changed!</P><>Oh my god! How annoyed  I was  when I heard  that. I wished that I could jump down the bus.But it couldn't stop on the high way.So I had to wait  until it arrive Hangzhou ,so disappointed. It fanally got to Hangzhou,I bought the tickct and came back soon. I was so tired.</P>

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-8 20:27 | 显示全部楼层
<>11.8</P><>I'd like to talk about reading today. </P><>When I was in primary school,we had few books to read. At  that time we only own the text books such as Chinese,Maths ,Science and so on. Sometimes the teacher gave us a stroy book which was so popular among us that we took turns to read it. We hoped that we could own lots of books when we grew up.</P><>Now  I grow up ,having  the chance  to read lots of  books.But I don't read so many good books as I expected before.Why?Maybe three pionts.</P><>First,since the net develops so quickly,we can learn all kinds of knowlege from the net.Besides that, the dazzling net world is of various information covering all areas of life.We can  read news,read books ,watch TV ,and listen to the music on the net. So I seldom read the paper book any more.</P><>Second,as grow up,I find it is a little hard to sit down to read. I am so impatient to finish a thick book,and I often hope to see a film that edited according to the book. Just like the fast food,now the fast reading is popular.</P><>Thirdly,  I can hardly find my favourite book now.There are so many books on the shelf but which is suitble for me?It is hard to choose,Sometimes the title of the book is attractive but the content is so boring. </P><>So now I seldom read thick books.I only read some good magazine such as "Reader",and "youth abstract".</P>

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-10 08:57 | 显示全部楼层
<>11.9</P><>This  morning it was reported that  a  careless person  was extremely  anxious  because  he forgot 100,000 RMB in a taxi. To his great joy ,the driver gave the money back to him very soon.</P><>This is really  good news  that makes me very happy.  In this world there is more kind people than criminals. I always believe that. Since I came here three months ago, I have met many kind persons,including my colleague,my new-made friends and some strangers. They help me much and make me feel warm.  I am grateful to them. </P><>I hope the world is full of love and everyone leads a happy life. Best wishes to you all.</P>

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-23 10:04 | 显示全部楼层
<>11.23</P><>I spent 5 days in hangzhou for training. The city is so beautiful with great  prosperity and nice scene. It reminds me of nanjing where i have stayed for 5 years.This two cities have much in commen as well as many differences. </P><>The consumption is lower in nanjing especially in food. According to nanjing's location that just near the changjiang river,the food is more various than hangzhou. It intigredes both northern and southern foods. The most famous and welcome food in nanjing is "suancaiyu" and duck. Suancaiyu first  came from sichuan and immediathly spreaded well in nanjing. The duck is nanjing's character and very delicious. People in nanjing enjoy their foods well.</P>

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-23 10:09 | 显示全部楼层
The great civilization made me a little upset.  I have ever lived in such a big city and dreamed to work in big cities.But finnally i came back to the town.

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-25 11:58 | 显示全部楼层
<>11。24</P><>What a sunny day today! The sunshine is  so warm that makes me  very happy. I walk in the sunshine,smiling and singing. </P><>Tomorrow is Saterday , I'd like to picnic in the opendoor or go   to climb the mountains if the wether is as nice as today.</P><>Such a nice day.</P>

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发表于 2005-12-6 13:36 | 显示全部楼层
I want to picnic,too.

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发表于 2005-12-6 13:33 | 显示全部楼层
Admiring!

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-2-21 21:33 | 显示全部楼层
<>After I graduated from university , I found it was so different from what I had exoected.  The reaIity was not the same as the company promised. I often complained about the low income and  seldom went shopping. But my mind changed one day when I saw some poor families.</P><>It was Sunday that I went to the country with some kind-hearted friends  who were the member of aixingwang(I don't know how to translate it in English). We went to see some poor families.  There was such a family that the father was dead and the mother was mad . The three children were about 8-13 years old and they were taken care of by their old grandma. They lived in a very small house with little furniture , let alone TV or other electricity things.The scene shocked  me so much that I  felt so sorry. I were suddengly  aweared that I was so rich that I had a good family and a wage to support myself. I gave them a little mony but I know it was of little help.</P><>After that I began to enjoy my life and smile to myself every morning.  I think if you are easy to be satisfied, you are easy to be happy.</P>

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-3-6 20:58 | 显示全部楼层
<>I met an old friend on the net.We have lost touch with each other for nearly 3 years. I remembered that 5 years ago when we were in the high school that we were best friend. We studied and played together,leading a very happy life.</P>
<>And when we were both in the university we still wrote or phoned each other. When did it changed? The phone  rang rarely. Maybe because we were too busy? I had no idea.</P>
<>Sometimes I think about what is permanent in this world? What will never changes as the time goes? No answer. </P>
<> Perhaps  the love of parents is one answer.</P>

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-3-8 11:11 | 显示全部楼层
<>Last weekend women in our company visited hangzhou together, celebrating  for the women's day. We went shopping and took boating in the west lake. The scene was so nice with green grass,green water and green hills. Nearly everyone bought clothes just like soldiers won a battle.</P>
<>And today is the women's day,may every woman happy and healthy besides myself. </P>

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发表于 2006-3-8 11:18 | 显示全部楼层
happy women's day !to you and to your momen world!

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-3-8 12:09 | 显示全部楼层
thank you ,<STRONG><FONT face=Verdana color=#61b713>maxwellwang:)</FONT></STRONG>

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发表于 2006-3-12 07:12 | 显示全部楼层
好厉害!

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发表于 2006-3-20 08:45 | 显示全部楼层
<>very good</P>

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发表于 2006-3-18 12:36 | 显示全部楼层
<>第二篇,帮你改了一下</P>
<>It is said that I was a clever and beautiful girl when I was yong.   Really?  I see into the mirror  only to find a short and fat  girl in it.Maybe I had been a nice girl,but now I look just like a ugly duck.</P>
<>After I entered  high school, I became fatter and fatter. At that time I never worried about it because most of my friends had told me I was so lovely a girl with a kind heart. But now, I find  it's terrible for me to be fat.First it makes me not healthy .Second,it's hard for me to buy some suitible clothes. These two makes me  annoyed.  So I decide to reduce my body's weight.</P>
<>For about two months I had kept  doing a great deal of exercises and eating little . I lost only 2 kg with my body's weight.  But I feel healthier and  more comfortable.   To my sadness, when I ate a little more last week, my body'sweight increased quickly .Oh, god save me,it seems to be a hard task for me to lose weight. </P>
<>建议多看看外文书籍,你的文章中国式英语太多,有些语法也不对,先写一些短句,尽量写正确,慢慢练习写长句。</P>

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发表于 2006-3-18 01:02 | 显示全部楼层
<>第7 篇.showed them to us ,炫耀用show off</P>
<>It was amazing that he changed a lot  since he was in high school.  改为since he been to high school.</P>
<>He  worked very hard in his study ,重复,要不study hard, 要不work hard</P>
<>20娄  fall in love with her,指与某人谈恋爱,爱上谁应为fall in love to sb.</P>
<>Among the most annoying is that a man  改为the most annoying thing is that a man  </P>
<>We were going to celebrate -------&gt;  when we were celebrating ,he send a massege which said:</P>
<>第9 篇 Along the way there were mountains ,你的意思我明白,along指沿着。。。。。,照你写的,就是山沿着路排列,其实是路在山上。were mountains with thick forests  which were  green and nice. 这里应该用一般现在时。</P>
<>mountains with ----mountains covered  with</P>
<>And the school was small but there standed a new building which seemed to be built by a  rich and kind person ,because its name was "ci xin lou".      And应该去掉, was应为is   to be built 应为built   its name was 应为its name is      表示客观情况的用一般现在时</P>
<>and draw-----》and drawing    She was kind to all of us that everyone loved her用so。。。。that。。。句型。she was so kind to us that we all loved her.</P>
<P>burst into laughter---&gt;burst into   laughing   </P>
<P>I smile to myself.这是啥意思?</P><br>
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